Cover -for a friend

So I know this girl, her name is Kim, she's pretty cool, and I was looking at her blog today and saw a song that I really liked. After listening to it a couple of times I decided I wanted to do a cover of it. So Sharkbait/kim tell me what you think. And P.s. Sharkbait you should write me and Megan back :) Anyway...This is my cover of Kiss Me Slowly by Parachute.